My Experience in
Studying Writing
Writing is
one of the courses that I like. It is not only at this time, but I like writing
since I was in junior high school.
Writing needs a long time to finish it because I have to find ideas and
express my mind in the brain first. Nevertheless, I still enjoy in studying
writing. When I studied paragraph writing last semester, I got spirit. I tried
to write a paragraph. After I finished, I showed it to the lecturer. My lecturers
were Mr. Saunir and Ms. Witri Oktavia.
Ms. Witri Oktavia is a lecturer who is
good in explaining the lesson. So that, I understood what she explained.
Besides, there were things that made me confused. When I did exercise, I felt
great, but the result was not suitable as I want. I asked to myself and I said,
“Where is the place of the error?” I also felt that my post had a good grammar.
In the end, I knew the place of the error. It happened because of my
carelessness in writing. My post was not coherence and had no continuity. I
take the lesson that studying writing is not easy and it needs seriousness.
Mr. Saunir
had a different way with Ms. Witri in teaching. Mr. Saunir just gave exercise
to do at home, and it will be presented in front of the class. Moreover, it
will be corrected together. Mr. Saunir did not give the point of homework, but
I just found the error of the post. Because he gave exercise to do at home, I
could finish it perfectly.
There is a weakness of some students in
writing include me. Writing at home can get more concentration than writing in
the campus. I can develop, improve, and edit my post if I am at home while I
must hurry to finish my post if I am in the campus, so I could not finish my
post perfectly. For example, when I did final examination last semester, I got
difficulty to find ideas and felt worry. If my post could not finish perfectly,
I was afraid because the time was limited. In the end, I could finish it
perfectly in final examination last semester. I tried to do the best for my
post and I have already pray that I will get a good result. Eventually, I got a
good result and gave thanks to Allah.
In
conclusion, I can take a lesson from my experience in studying writing last
semester. In this semester, I will try to improve my writing skills. I hope
that I will be able to get a better result than before.
I like your experience about writing but you should concern for using transition, i found mistake there. You should find or add your vocab more varieties, so reader isn't bored for reading and analyze your essay. Overall you did well.
BalasHapus" “Where is the place of the error?” "
BalasHapuswhat does this sentence mean ?
It is the best from the two before. Good job. Improve it more and more because writing is an endless process. getting more you read, getting more the mistakes that you found.
BalasHapusThis sentence means, I ask to myself about the error of my writing. I don't know where is the place of the error actually So that, I use quotation marks in it.
BalasHapusDon't you understand what I mean,riza???
Your experience in writing last semester is so interesting :)
BalasHapusThanks a lot for Deanty and Tio.:)
BalasHapusThank you,cipa :D
BalasHapus100 for you
BalasHapusI don't know why; I don't catch your thesis statement.
BalasHapusDoes something go wrong to me or you guys didn't notice it?
Yeah anike. Thanks for your comment. I realize it after you've commented. I will fix it and make clear the thesis statement. :)
HapusHmm,...,nice essay...,,but you can write a lot about your experience and make it more on your conclusion.
BalasHapusThanks,nisa:)
Hapusthe words that you should add "s"
BalasHapus-experience
-lesson
-way
you have a good abilty in your writing skills. but I thing you have a problem with make a good conclusion. please expand it more.
BalasHapusOk. Thanks,fero:)
Hapusgood job vira.. improve your writing . you can do the better one. :) (y)
BalasHapusThanks,meca:)
Hapus"Ms. Witri Oktavia is a lecturer who is good in explaining the lesson." you can change this sentence to other way.
BalasHapusI think your thesis statement did not coherence with the main point that want you explain. Therefore,I suggest you repair it.. :)
BalasHapusYeah,elsa. I realize it. Thank you;)
Hapus" So that, I understood what she explained. Besides, there were things that made me confused."
BalasHapusyou can't use so in the first sentence vira :-D
make it coherence vira:) you did well
BalasHapusYou have a great Idea , but it's better for you to check the developing of your idea.
BalasHapus"When I studied paragraph writing last semester, I got spirit." for example this sentence , you should explain what spirit that you got.
1. Where s your thesis statement, Vira?
BalasHapus2. Pay attention in your tense, especially in past tense. You tell about the past, so you have to use past tense
3. Writing is one of the courses that I like. It is not only at this time, but I like writing since I was in junior high school. => “Writing was one of the courses that I liked. It was not only at this time, but I liked writing since I was in junior high school. ”
4. Writing needs a long time to finish it because I have to find ideas and express my mind in the brain first. => “Writing needed a long time to finish it because I had to find the ideas and expressed my mind in the brain first.
5. “there were things,,,” => “there were many things”
6. it will be presented in front of the class. => it would be presented in front of the class.
7. it will be corrected together => “ it would be corrected together”
8. You need to elaborate more you conclusion. Add some supporting details in it.
your essay is great
BalasHapusgood essay
BalasHapusand it will be presented==>>would