The Way that I am Going
to Do to Pass
Essay Writing
Successfully
After I passed paragraph writing course last semester,
I hope I will pass essay writing course this semester. Essay writing is surely
more difficult than paragraph writing. To pass this course, I will take a
lesson from my experience last semester. There are four ways that I am going to
do to pass this course successfully and get a better result than before.
Firstly, I will concentrate on the lesson that
the lecturer explain. I did not probably concentrate on the lesson that the
lecturer explained last semester. I looked at the lecturer, but my mind did not
concentrate on the lesson. When the lecturer gave exercise or homework, I did
not understand and felt confused. Because I did not understand, I surely asked
my friends to help me. This thing is the lesson for me to continue essay
writing course. I must concentrate on the lesson that the lecturer explain.
Secondly, I will be active in the class. I
was not probably active in the class last semester. I was shy asking questions
about the lesson. It made me not active in the class. Actually, I wanted to ask
questions, but I was worried rising my hand. I also wanted to answer questions,
but I was afraid making a wrong. I take a lesson from there. I will change my
way of studying in the class. I will be active and try to be brave asking
questions.
Thirdly, I will be diligent doing
exercise or homework. I was probably lazy doing homework last semester. I did
homework in a day before it will be given to lecturers, so I hurried to finish it.
In this semester, I will do homework faster than before, so I do not hurry to
finish it.
Finally, I will be diligent reading the
book. I was probably lazy reading the book last semester, so I did not
understand about the lesson. I bought the book, but I did not read and review
the lesson in the book. In this semester, I will try to be diligent reading the
book, reviewing the lesson, and doing exercise in the book even though the
lecturer does not ask to do it.
In
conclusion, there are four ways that I am going to do for this semester. They
are: concentrate on the lesson; be active in the class; be diligent doing
homework; and be diligent reading the book. By this ways, I hope I will be able
to pass essay writing successfully this semester.
In your title, you should use or write just one word that contains all of your essay not sentence, it's too long and not interesting, please improve it. And you should add attention getter to make your essay is not too common.
BalasHapusOkay. Thanks for your comment and suggestion, dea:)
HapusDo your plans soon vira ! :D
BalasHapusActually what I express is not same with what I do, riza:D
HapusNevertheless, I will make efforts to do my plans :)
1. There are four (P.1) Therefore there are four
BalasHapus2. There is no coherence and unity in paragraph two.
That’s all nice essay !
Thanks for your comment, tio. :D
HapusWow! Your plans are good :)
BalasHapusYeah.Thanks,cipa. Actually it's not easy to do what I express in it, but I will try to do it. Hehe :D
Hapuslet's try together your plans...
BalasHapusI will be diligent reading the book==>at reading. be careful in using gerund.
BalasHapusmake each paragraph coherence.
Overall, good job, Vira.
Wow,....,..good dear,...,your ideas is clear,..,,:D
BalasHapusadd "s" in the word "my experience" in first paragraph because it's plural
BalasHapuswill you change the transition in each of the paragraph?
BalasHapusit's good Vira... I get your ideas.. :)
BalasHapusit's not only one way that you are going to do, so you have to change the world "way" to be "ways" in your title.
BalasHapusVira, you wrote " Because I did not understand,..." in second paragraph. So, I have suggestion to omit and change " Because" with another transition.
BalasHapusgreat vira :-D
BalasHapusyour ideas are clearly,,you do it best vira :-)
nice vira:) it is good essay
BalasHapusYour title is too long to be a title. your second paragraph has many sudden jump sentences. pay attention to your punctuation.keep rocking !
BalasHapus1. You have a mistake in writing the words “paragraph writing”. It is suppose to be Paragraph Writing.
BalasHapus2. You have a mistake in writing the words “essay writing”. It is suppose to be Essay Writing.
3. I was shy asking questions about the lesson. => I was shy to ask the questions about the lesson.
4. I was worried rising my hand. => I was worried to raise my hand.
5. You still need to pay attention about your tense.
6. In all, your ideas are developed well. Great job! :D
your idea is coherence
BalasHapusyou have done the rules in writing...
BalasHapusgreat esssay
I like your essay :)
BalasHapusWow.. I think your tittle is too long...
BalasHapus