The Benefits of
Studying Writing
Writing is thinking on paper and expressing something
in mind through posts. People who are good in writing without good in composing
have no points. Instead, people who are good in composing without good in
writing have no points. If I want to be good in writing, I must be good in
composing. I need studying writing because it has many benefits for my life.
There are three benefits of studying writing.
Firstly, studying writing has benefits for
my society life. I can publish my post through blog or other social media, so
my post can be seen by many people. I do not need to be shy or worry to publish
it. I should be brave to write and publish it. I can be famous people. In
addition, by publish my post, I can inspire many people. When people read my
post, people find an idea from my post. Moreover, by studying writing, I have a
lot of knowledges. I do not only share the knowledge through oral, but I can
also share it through post. I can be easy to socialize with many people.
Secondly, studying writing has benefits for
my academic life. By studying writing, I can improve my writing skills. Moreover,
studying writing can helps me to finish my study. To finish my study, I will
surely write paper and thesis. By studying writing, I know that how to write
paper and thesis, so I can finish my study.
Thirdly, studying writing has benefits
for my future life. By studying writing, I will surely have writing skills. It
helps me to find a job like become a good writer or author. God have already
planned something for my future. By having the ability, I can use it for my
future life. I can be famous people and find a good job.
In
conclusion, studying writing is very important because it has many benefits.
Studying writing has many benefits for my society life, my academic life, and
my future life.
For this essay, i see you have learned and improved your writing become better. Go on and keep improving your writing become the best one. Good job.
BalasHapusmake your conclusion longer !
BalasHapus1. I need studying writing because it has many benefits for my life. There are three benefits of studying writing (P.1) sudden jumps
BalasHapus2. my society life (P.2) my social life
3. by publish my post (P.2) by publishing my post
4. people find (P.2) they’ll find
5. Moreover, by studying writing, I have a lot of knowledges (P.2) sudden jump
6. can helps (P.3) can help
7. God have already planned something for my future. By having the ability, I can use it for my future life. I can be famous people and find a good job (P.4) sudden jump
8. Make your conclusion longer.
Your introductory paragaraph is interesting ...
BalasHapusThanks a lot guys. :)
BalasHapusvery good..;)
BalasHapusPeople who are good in writing==>good at
BalasHapusI can be famous people.==>not coherence.
Reread the forth paragraph, there are some sudden jumps.
Thank u,
make it balance each paragraph dear,..,.,:)
BalasHapusi agree with annike's comment, "i can be famous people" is not coherence
BalasHapusyour conclusion, only two sentences? is that appropriate?
BalasHapusadd some sentences on your conclution Vir,..
BalasHapusover all, you did well :)
you have to add some sentences in your conclusion because it's too short.
BalasHapusyour essay is excellent but at the second paragraph you write "When people read my post, people find an idea from my post." Its better for you to change with "When the people read my post, they will find an idea from it"
BalasHapusYour essay is perfect :-D
BalasHapusbut your conclusion is too short
you need to add some ideas in your conclusion , it's too short.
BalasHapusagain , make it coherence. avoid the sudden jump sentences.
Keep rocking !
You need to elaborate more our conclusion. I think it is too short. You can add some supporting details in it. In some paragraph you also need to add some supporting details. Each paragraph is not balance. Sometimes, in one paragraph has many supporting details but the others are not.
BalasHapusyour essay is interesting
BalasHapusremember ! after modal ,a verb has to infinitive form
BalasHapusgood essay